Planning Blog: Script

Scene 1 

Riley and Marissa sit on the couch after school chatting. 

Marissa: So have you talked to Mackena yet since everything happened? 

Riley: No it's been like 6 months since I last spoke to her. 

Marissa: Well it's honestly for the best. She was never good to you. I always had a bad feeling about her. 

Riley: Yeah, I guess so. 

Marissa: Okay well let's get your mind off this. Let's play a game. What's your favorite? 

Riley: My all-time favorite is hide and go seek! 

Marissa: Let's do it! 


Scene 2 

Marissa and Riley continue to play hide and seek for a while until Marissa can't find Riley. 

Marissa: Riley where are you? it's been half an hour. This isn't funny anymore! 

There is a loud scream in the distance shortly after  


Scene 3  

There is then a flashback of Mackena and Riley as kids and the sound of laughter fills the atmosphere. 

No dialogue 


Scene 4  

Marissa finds Riley tied up and Mackena is behind her with a Knife. 

Marissa: OH MY GOD 

Scene 5 

Mackena is now standing behind Riley. 

Mackena: now it's your turn! 




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